On Saturday me and my friends went out fishing. We went out to Christchurch beach (in this story we live there).While we were there we caught Snapper and Grouper.Three hours later just when we were about to go home my rod was swaying left to right and it was swaying so hard that i fell in the water. Then dad came over to pick me up.Then we had a lot of explaining to do to mum. one month later we went back to go fishing and it happed again except this time Sean fell in. then we thought a shark or whale was eating the bait. So the next time we went fishing we went to another location by nick
Respect
Respect is friendship Respect is BFFS Respect is kindness Respect is happiness
Respect
Respect other people’s things, places and feelings Don’t think you are different cause in moderation everyone is the same
Respect is support, help Respect is keeping ourselves safe Respect other families, cultures and there houses
Respect is using manners Respect is including other people Respect is helping people Respect is not stealing
Assessment for writing
y = term 2
Not at all
Sometimes
All the time
· I can write for a range of purposes across the curriculum
y
· I can spell most words and underline words I am not sure are spelt correctly,
y
· I can mostly use punctuation correctly
y
· I can write using relevant content which includes detail and / or comment which supports the main ideas
y
· I can uses paragraphs to support main ideas
y
· I can use correct grammar
y
· I can use topic specific language
y
· I can use adjectives and verbs to make my writing more interesting.
y
This term I have got better at…. WOW words punctuation and openers
Next step : By the end of this term I will get better at……… connectives and grammer
In the holidays I went to Invercargil and we arrived on Christmas eve. The next day it was Christmas day so I got Lego star wars and a solar bird and lots of chocolate. The next day I went to the driving range in Queens Park and I was caddy.The next day I went to the pools and went down the hydro- slide. The next day we were packing up to go to Queenstown, When we got there our uncles and cousins were there. The next day we went to mini golf and dad got a hole in one and we got another round. The next day we went on the luge and on that day we went on a hill to watch new years eve and then we went back to Invercargil to spend our last days there. We then went on to Doylston to spend 3 days there. Finally we to Picton to go on the boat and home.
i need to get better at punctuation,connectives WOW words and a littel bit of openers
On Saturday me and my friends went out fishing. We went out to Christchurch beach (in this story we live there).While we were there we caught Snapper and Grouper.Three hours later just when we were about to go home my rod was swaying left to right and it was swaying so hard that i fell in the water. Then dad came over to pick me up.Then we had a lot of explaining to do to mum. one month later we went back to go fishing and it happed again except this time Sean fell in. then we thought a shark or whale was eating the bait. So the next time we went fishing we went to another location by nick
Respect
Respect is friendship
Respect is BFFS
Respect is kindness
Respect is happiness
Respect
Respect other people’s things, places and feelings
Don’t think you are different cause in moderation everyone is the same
Respect is support, help
Respect is keeping ourselves safe
Respect other families, cultures and there houses
Respect is using manners
Respect is including other people
Respect is helping people
Respect is not stealing
y = term 2
Next step : By the end of this term I will get better at……… connectives and grammer
In the holidays I went to Invercargil and we arrived on Christmas eve. The next day it was Christmas day so I got Lego star wars and a solar bird and lots of chocolate. The next day I went to the driving range in Queens Park and I was caddy.The next day I went to the pools and went down the hydro- slide. The next day we were packing up to go to Queenstown, When we got there our uncles and cousins were there. The next day we went to mini golf and dad got a hole in one and we got another round. The next day we went on the luge and on that day we went on a hill to watch new years eve and then we went back to Invercargil to spend our last days there. We then went on to Doylston to spend 3 days there. Finally we to Picton to go on the boat and home.
i need to get better at punctuation,connectives WOW words and a littel bit of openers